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DG-ART85 Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
@00:30Thanks!:D
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CheshireCat8D Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2009  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
@00:05Ooh neat style!

However do notice at 0:04, considering where her head is facing, her left (our right) nostril should not be more prominent than her right nostril rather than the other way around. Generally speaking, the side farther from the viewer becomes more obscure.
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DG-ART85 Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
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This is my first animation i did in final cut pro for class. This is my original story called Gwen Tells. It is an Story of a young girl and her possessed Panda Teddy Bear, Now her life gets weirder and weirder. The tone of this animation is a eerie but fun animation....

Hope you all enjoy.
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:iconjdctk88:
JDCTK88 Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
@00:30great job here!!
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:icondg-art85:
DG-ART85 Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
@00:30Thanks!:D
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toulon2342 Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
@00:30Supertastic!
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:icondg-art85:
DG-ART85 Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
@00:30Thanks glad you like it....it took hella long to do 30 sec of animatic:shrug:
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:icontoulon2342:
toulon2342 Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
That's what I hear.
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Chizel-Man Featured By Owner May 12, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
@00:30VEry nice man.
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:icondg-art85:
DG-ART85 Featured By Owner May 14, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
@00:30Thanks dude, glad you where entertained:D
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Chizel-Man Featured By Owner May 15, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
@00:30Your welcome man. real talent:D
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CheshireCat8D Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2009  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
@00:05Ooh neat style!

However do notice at 0:04, considering where her head is facing, her left (our right) nostril should not be more prominent than her right nostril rather than the other way around. Generally speaking, the side farther from the viewer becomes more obscure.
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Ambidextrous Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2009
@00:30cool!!!!
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:icondg-art85:
DG-ART85 Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
@00:30Thanks ambi....glad you like it...but i knew ya would, gwen seems like your type of character:D
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Ambidextrous Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2009
@00:30Is she also in that one story line about the kids who are super heroes?
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:icondg-art85:
DG-ART85 Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
@00:30Nope this is a whole new line of characters :D
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TreStyles Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
@00:30Pretty tight son.
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DG-ART85 Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
@00:30Thanx Tre man I will glad ya like it alot of work went behind this, but glad you were entertained:D
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mrcontroversial Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
@00:18This is good bro, giving an interesting sneak peek about what's to come. I think that more movement (or having Gwen change positions) would suffice her more, instead of having the same pose move across screen all the time (in some parts of the beginning).

I do like the movement of the black mist creature. That's pretty good to work with. :) Maybe the audio for Gwen's narration could be turned up a little (not much a pinch - try it, to see if you may like it or not).

Lastly, I do like the character designs for Gwen. For the teddy bear, I feel like it may not look as polished as Gwen. If you are able to polish the bear some more, to keep it consistent with Gwen, it'll really look hot. :)

Continue to push bro, and looking to see what Gwen has to showcase. :)
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DG-ART85 Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
@00:18Thanks for the good critique Mr. contro, well take notes for the next one:D
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mrcontroversial Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
@00:18You're welcome bro! :) Continue to push and learn. :)
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DG-ART85 Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
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enixeffex Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2009
@00:30flippin awesome bro! can't wait to see more!
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DG-ART85 Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
@00:30Thanx man, it was like hell doing it, but i got a good grade:D
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DG-ART85 Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
@00:30Thanx yeah it was an A:D
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